My poem
WALT: Create a picture in our reader's mind by including descriptive detail
Last week our class were working on poems.
I chose to do mine on a little ship in a bottle. We got 40 Adjectives on the thing we picked, then got the best eighteen, and made a poem on a website and voilĂ we have a poem. Here is mine.
I found it quite hard to get 40 Adjectives and then choose the best ones. Maybe next time I will choose a easier object...
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